massisan Posted February 19, 2015 Report Share Posted February 19, 2015 made this 3 trunk white birch yesterday night.wanted to make a more special 1 rather then make the typical birch shapes that you can find on the web.this is obviousley a hero tree.more lighter versions i will finish up today. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tora_2097 Posted February 19, 2015 Report Share Posted February 19, 2015 Hi Massian! Looking good in terms of volume and outline but I think it can be improved further. First thing is to add some more obvious specular reflections and vertex colorization to the leaves, they appear quite dull and uniform. Is the geo for leaves bent in any direction? If not, it could help, although birch tree leaves are quite flat in reality as well. I cant be sure but it seems the middle stem reaches the very top of the tree, I found it increases realism if the main trunk splits of into different sections at some point along the length, although there are of course trees like you did it. Thirdly, I can see a texture tiling problem in the stems circumference, there is a brightness/detail disparity. Regards, Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massisan Posted February 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2015 hi benjamin, youre right with what you say about specular.i was just so tired that i hit render last night.but i will improve this tree further.i ahve many different versions of the tree so this is just 1 of them and realy love the shape though.about the tiling i thought i had fixed it yesterday because i saw it.so apparently i didn't .will try the split trunk think as well.ach und danke wir koennen auch gern auf deutsch reden ;-) gruss massi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massisan Posted February 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2015 so i call this 3 trunk birch finished for now.added some color variations in the leaves fixed the bark and the specular.also made a fall variation with less leaves and the typical colors of fall.tomorrow i want to make a bunch of variations of this tree 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doncht Posted July 18, 2015 Report Share Posted July 18, 2015 Nonetheless, I think you've done a pretty good job here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massisan Posted July 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2015 thx a lot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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